the critics spoke,
and at first she listened.
and at first she defended,
and at first she questioned,
and at first she wondered why.
the one that was so quiet,
had so much to say,
behind the safety of another.
criticism to be passed from one,
to another,
to her.
but to her it was
a critic.
and she could no longer
see the line drawn
between
the constructive
and the afraid.
and when
she realised she had
only considered “i”
and not “they”
and not how what “they” said
reflected “them”
and not “her”
she picked up the pencil
and drew the line
and placed those whose
reflections
reflected “them”
and not “her”
on one side,
and those who could
accept
“her” challenge
on the other.
beside her.
because what
those on the other side
had said
had never really reflected
“her”
but “them”,
and she no longer
would be reduced
for their comfort.
– a.
Reblogged this on lexa and commented:
I would love this post even if you weren’t my beautiful niece. But the fact that you are, makes me love it even more.
Keep on being authentic and sassy and I hope others go and check out your (new) blog and get as much out of your powerful words as I do.
Critics criticise that which they don’t understand.
That which is beyond them.
And which makes them look inferior.
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Beautiful! Take opinions on board but always trust in your own inner voice – she/he has your best interests at heart. Lovely post 🙂
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Thankyou! Couldn’t agree more.
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That is great welldone!
Looking forward of reading other posts!
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Thanks! Glad to hear it.
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I normally don’t like poetry, but your words touched me. Beautifully written!
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Thank you Samantha! It really means a lot to me to hear that. Glad you enjoyed. A x
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